Our Two Sense
Tread Carefully - revisited
Posted by Two Sense (Atlantic Shores, United States) on 15 March 2008 in Art & Design.
Lilly : Silly shoes for walking this rubble . . oh, look at the shattered dreams all around me . . I see a dime, a toothless comb, a torn playing card . . . ouch!. .
Ronnie : Not sure they’ll let me in the FAS wearing these shoes . . always so hushed in there and the left heel squeaks slightly . . eeek! . . there it goes again.
A record of timeslots shared : all images and storylines © www.ourtwosense.com ("O2S") 2008, 2009
Ron from Saint Louis, United States
Outstanding…you started my day off with a laugh. Thanks!
15 Mar 2008 1:46pm
alex centrella from fresno, United States
nice work again ...........................................................
15 Mar 2008 1:57pm
zOOm from Paris, France
I like this paradoxical view... between mess and order, rotten and clean... an idea of what the world is... sometimes... often...
15 Mar 2008 2:17pm
Michael Skorulski from Cigel, Slovakia
I like the perspective and detail. And your spoken lines are really funny. Excellent images.
15 Mar 2008 4:53pm
Toño from Estella, Spain
What a composition!!! I really like it very much,congrats.
15 Mar 2008 8:00pm
GJC from Kyoto, Japan
I am so impressed that you two are able to keep this up in such creative ways. Here again the contrasts in fact bring the image together. Really well done.
16 Mar 2008 2:27am
Marion from Nanaimo, BC, Canada
I am loving this series Ronnie. They always look as though they are just one picture and that in itself is really great art, but the contrasts are wonderful. Great work.
16 Mar 2008 6:18am
yiannis krikis from thessaloniki, Greece
very beautiful diptych and great text for it - I like it a lot
16 Mar 2008 7:46am
Nishana Minhaz from Calicut, India
At first glance, I thought this was a single picture, n wondered what happened..U guys have paired them up so perfectly! Good job!
16 Mar 2008 3:42pm
akarui from Kagoshima, Japan
Interesting montage. In my first glance I thought it was only 1 picture as the separation isn't clear. Very creative. My suggestion would be to flip vertically the left picture, doing this the shoes should be in a lower position than the right shoes (the left black shoe is showing the low part of the picture and the eyes are going naturally there).
16 Mar 2008 11:25pm
@akarui: (from Ronnie 2¢) Thank you very much for your kind Comment and excellent suggestion, Akarui. Lilly and I spent quite a while on this one trying different visual combinations but missed this (now!) obvious variation. I agree it forms a far better composition and have re-posted the image here. Thank you again.
bronzebilly u.k. from Barry,Vale of Glamorgan, United Kingdom
A fresh new p/blog on the scene and what a superb idea and layout ,pals..nice work..
Billy...
17 Mar 2008 12:44am
tyan from Singapore, Singapore
you are a poet in your own right!I like your style!:)
17 Mar 2008 2:22am
Doug from Long Beach, United States
Very interesting. You are taking photography in a new direction.
17 Mar 2008 5:43am
drphoto from Newcastle upon Tyne, United Kingdom
Very clever blending with this one, your technique is becoming more refined. Love the juxtaposition and I'm glad you did the v-flip because it does create a stronger compostion.
This is my favourite candidate for photoblog of the year - its just such a fresh approach!
Dan
17 Mar 2008 6:10am
@drphoto: (from Ronnie 2¢) . . thanx, Dan. I might want to quote you on that ‘photoblog of the year’ idea !
Pavla from Saint James City, United States
Amazing series....fun, clever, entertaining...lovely!
17 Mar 2008 1:21pm
Steven from Chicagoland, United States
A very nice contrast in photos. I so know what you mean about shoe "noise." If I don't wear the shoes that sound like tap dancing shoes, then I end up wearing shoes that end up sounding too squeaky. :-)
17 Mar 2008 3:28pm
lissa from New York, United States
I love this combination, it's like your both are in the same place.
17 Mar 2008 11:43pm
danthro from Suburbia, United States
neat shot. almost like you're facing each other. what is the FAS/Fine art society, and why on earth would they kick you out for having squeaky shoes?
19 Mar 2008 1:22am
@danthro: (from Ronnie 2¢) Fine Art Society is an art dealer which opened in London in 1876. It really is so quiet in there other than the scratch of pen nibs writing the odd $500,000 check!
Alfredo J. Martiz J. from Tokyo, Japan
I am enjoying your storytelling and photos, nice contrast of moments in this one!
20 Mar 2008 10:56pm
