Our Two Sense
2¢ Sunday Comics : Story 1, part 1
Posted by Two Sense (Atlantic Shores, United States) on 25 January 2009 in Miscellaneous and Portfolio.
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Scene One of a little drama in three parts for Sundays only . . to be continued.
[ Scene 2 of 3 ] [ Scene 3 of 3 ]
Happy Sunday to All.
Lilly and Ronnie
A record of timeslots shared : all images and storylines © www.ourtwosense.com ("O2S") 2008, 2009
Paco Díaz from Palma de Mallorca, Spain
Very funny, well composed.
Waiting for the next part :)
25 Jan 2009 11:35am
@Paco Díaz: :
(from Ronnie) . .thanks, Paco. Pt 2 is in the can but Lilly has written a tough script for Pt 3! We're working on it.
yz from Budapest, Hungary
Hehe, very funny. The wooden puppet has a really human expression.
25 Jan 2009 11:50am
Andrew Gould from Sydney, Australia
Can't wait to see how the story turns out! Great little scenes, here. Love the composition on the left. Body language and relationship between these two is great. In the photo on the right, what I like is the roundness and texture of the wood. Works on many levels, then.
25 Jan 2009 1:12pm
@Andrew Gould: :
Thanks, Andrew. It is kinda scary how those figures take on life attributes . .
Chris from South Jersey, United States
what a great idea - can't wait to see the rest......
25 Jan 2009 1:20pm
Zorilla from H, T & E, United Kingdom
Kaw-liga was a wooden Indian standing by the door.
He fell in love with an Indian maiden over in the antique store.
Kaw-liga just stood there and never let it show,
So she could never answer "yes" or "no."
Poor ol' Kaw-liga, he never got a kiss.
Poor ol' Kaw-liga, he don't know what he missed.
Is it any wonder that his face is red?
Kaw-liga, that poor ol' wooden head.
He always wore his Sunday feathers and held a tomahawk.
The maiden wore her beads and braids and hoped some day he'd talk.
Kaw-liga, too stubborn to ever show a sign,
Because his heart was made of knotty pine.
Kaw-liga was a lonely Indian, never went nowhere.
His heart was set on the Indian maid with the coal black hair.
Kaw-liga just stood there and never let it show,
So she could never answer "yes" or "no."
And then one day a wealthy customer bought the Indian maid,
And took her, oh, so far away, but ol' Kaw-liga stayed.
Kaw-liga just stands there as lonely as can be,
And wishes he was still an old pine tree.
Kaw-Liga (Hank Williams)
25 Jan 2009 1:27pm
@Zorilla: :
Wish we'd thought of that, ourselves, Zorilla ! Thanks so much for contributing this.
ordinaryimages from Kentucky Bluegrass, United States
loosen up your wooden self, she's hot! best...jerry
25 Jan 2009 4:32pm
@António Pires: :
Thanx, António ! We really had fun with these and learned a lot in developing the techniques . . still longs ways to go but, somehow, the unreality was a plus point in many ways.
Barbara from Florida, United States
I think Jerry a/k/a ordinaryimages said it best.
Sometimes when we are rigid we past up the best opportunities. Give in, take a chance who knows what could happen.
Great comic! Outstanding images.
25 Jan 2009 5:30pm
EYES WIDE SHUT from United Kingdom
What a clever concept. I'm looking forward to the next part now. You could have something of a cult hit on your hands here.
25 Jan 2009 5:33pm
dogilicious from Millerstown, PA, United States
Lot of philosophy n these comments. I thought the compositions were very human like. Great shots; both.
25 Jan 2009 8:05pm
Observing from West Cheshire, United Kingdom
A great new project R+L, I'm looking forward to seeing how this relationship blossoms !
25 Jan 2009 8:27pm
Margie from Auckland, New Zealand
Ooo...a continuing story, how fabulous!
You two are so creative, I love it. Looking forward to the next one!
25 Jan 2009 9:02pm
JJ from Jersey City, United States
Very cool work funny how toys can almost seem to have a life of there own as you have done here, looking forward to next segment
25 Jan 2009 9:14pm
baobab from Cambridge, United States
I'm with her on this one - take the risk! ;-)
25 Jan 2009 9:34pm
Anita from West Nottingham, United States
I failed to say how excellently set up these two scenes are (pls. ignore poor grammar). They look so real and life-sized!
25 Jan 2009 9:49pm
Lunamania from Oakland, United States
I love the tilt of the wooden doll's head! Very expressive. Looking forward to the next installments.
26 Jan 2009 12:24am
Michael Skorulski from Cigel, Slovakia
Great fun, crisp images and excellent dialogue, Ronnie.
26 Jan 2009 2:25am
Doug from Long Beach, United States
Part 1? But I have no patience! Must we wait a whole week?
26 Jan 2009 2:36am
bluechameleon from Vancouver, Canada
Another rejection...it's tough out there!
This is great Ronnie, fun and imaginative. Great images and dialog.
26 Jan 2009 4:56am
Monique from Koh Samui, Thailand
Can't wait to see the next one! The sad posture of the wooden man is a great capture, I hope she can cheer him up!
26 Jan 2009 5:23am
Isao from isère, France
la suite, la suite !!!!!!!!
j'adore !
chouette montage sur la première vignette, avec le détail du reflet de la poupée...
Following, following !!!
I love !
nice editing on the first vignette, with details of the reflection of the doll ...
26 Jan 2009 9:09am
djedfre from schaumburg, United States
going to make us wait, are you?! careful - they may take on a life of their own - and then you'll be out a blog!
26 Jan 2009 10:12am
Shuva Brata Deb from Hyderabad, India
"You look rather lonely. Would you like to dance". That is a very strange thing to say. I cant imagine myself be lonely and depressed and a lovely girl comes up to me asking me to dance. I would see her with suspicion.
26 Jan 2009 10:39am
DaveB from Exeter, United Kingdom
That girls levitating! Its David Blaine in drag! :)
26 Jan 2009 11:22am
SPunkt from Stuttgart, Germany
Waiting for part 2 … *wait* …
Fascinating how "vivid" puppets can be.
26 Jan 2009 1:51pm
MadScientist from Düsseldorf, Germany
Ooooh, boy meets girl, can't wait for the next part!
26 Jan 2009 2:47pm
dobbino from Cape Town, South Africa
I just love people who can make things like this so lifelike - looking forward to how this pans out. Has to be a happy ending to it....
26 Jan 2009 3:58pm
Earnest from Oklahoma, United States
OK, an interesting opening... looking forward to the rest.
26 Jan 2009 4:22pm
willow from Chelsea, United States
I think he's being a bit stuffy - go ahead, dance with her!!!!!
26 Jan 2009 5:58pm
Laurent from Lyon, France
We have to wait till next sunday!!!!!I'm lookink foward the rest of the cartoon.
He his really made of wood to resist to such a beauty
26 Jan 2009 6:08pm
payam from tehran, Iran
coming back after some time , I enjoyed reading/watching your photos , too interesting combinations I've found . thanks :)
26 Jan 2009 7:03pm
Fliss from Melbourne Beach, United States
Love it... let me guess... the guy's name is Woody?????? Hahahaha
26 Jan 2009 10:27pm
Richard_Irwin from Belper, United Kingdom
Nice one, this is going to be a fun few sundays.
26 Jan 2009 11:28pm
Pied Crow from Nairobi, Kenya
The complete contrast between the classic wooden artist's figure and the hyper-commercial pop product is terrific, makes us wonder what they will find in common.
27 Jan 2009 4:46am
lisa v from Gawler, Australia
I did this once with Ken and Barbie and a pink car. They'd got past the courtship stage though ;)
29 Jan 2009 12:18am
Rachel from Charleville-Mézières, France
Triste et désagréable ce bonhomme. Quelle tête de bois ! ;o))
10 Feb 2009 6:45am
